Also it's Rainbow Dash not rainbow-dash the hyphen (I think that's what they're called?) is used needlessly many many times. And if you say that English isn't your first language fine but for the record I know for a fact that you can change the language settings of spell-check in Microsoft Word. Please just do me this favor and use the spell-check. Now don't get me wrong I am enjoying the story it's just that the mistakes are jarring and take away from the experience. These things along with horribly misplaced punctuation as well as unnessecary words really throw me off. It's not twilight sparkle it's Twilight Sparkle. Also it really bothers me when someone forgets to capitalize proper nouns. Furthermore honestly I'm in no place to judge when it comes to spelling cause I suck at it but what especially bothered me is that you kept writing side instead of said. On that note if your typing this on a tablet or phone make sure you have auto-correct on so you can fix silly mistakes. It would help to know if English is your first language, but really a lot of trouble could be saved if you just ran this through spell-check before posting it. Ok where do I start? So I'm not trying to be mean but this has a lot of errors in it.
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